Oh No! An alien has kidnapped me!

One night when I was lying in bed, an alien came into my bedroom. I was scared but the alien told me that he was friendly.

Next he took me to the planet Mars in his spacehip. Mars was big and red. Whilst I was there the alien told me he was going to give me a super power. He sprinkled some glittery space dust on me and suddenly I began to float. It felt brilliant because I had never flown before.

The alien then told me that I would be able to fly home. I decided to jump out of the space ship and then flew home to tell my Mummy and Daddy but they didn't believe me!

By Dylan Walsh.

Dylan has really listened to what makes a BIG WRITE special. Look out for his time words, 'wow' words and his connective. Well done Dylan.